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hurry up and wait

by ~Karma8

friday again
hurry up and go to work
mindless tasks that don't take my mind off of....
work drags by interminably
hurry up and wait

saturday again
drifting listlessly
my heart sinks
my mind goes numb
hurry up and wait

sunday again
listen to God, but he's not talking
children laugh and play
but i have nothing to laugh about
hurry up and wait

missed again
lost an opportunity
passed up by cruel fate
lost my smile
hurry up and wait


i hate waiting
:iconkarma8:
Second poem I wrote while feeling down and missing the same friend.
:iconstarblind:
Very nice... has a good rhythm to it, it could make a nice song if set to music...

--
Andrew Lenahan
http://www.starblind.com
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:iconkarma8:
Thank you, starblind.... at the moment, I'm quite unable to comment on how I felt when I wrote this....
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